Critique please?

[erika]

first I'd just like to say I know there is no credit on the image, the character is not even born yet so I will be adding credits when I use her so for now they're just credits on DA. Also, I know the tail is kind jacked up and I"m gonna be trying to fix that but suggestions on how to do it would be great since the origional image's tail is odd O.o ANYWHO feel free to be harsh if you feel the urge I can take it and I like harsh critique as long as it isnt abusive because I'm trying to improve

fuzzdoodle89.deviantart.com/art/Critter-184241746?q=sort%3Atime+gallery%3Afuzzdoodle89&qo=0

thanks to anyone who is willing to critique it!

[Lady Entice]

Really like the idea for this manipulation, and you are right the tail is a little bit odd, i like the fact that you have brought out the contrast in both the pure white coat and dark muzzle and streaks, i think the horse needs to be a little softer, by duplicating the horse layer, smudging that and then lowering the opacity.
And maybe search for some tutorials on how to create snow tracks and build up around the hooves it would add more realism to this piece
Really good effort