Critique: The Flight

[Butterfly Kisses]

Here is a link to my latest piece. I would love to hear your thoughts/critiques on it

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[`Poet.]

I really like this one! Love the wings on the horse, adds a little something to the image :3

There are a few things that I see that could be improved upon:

• Colors: I think that either the background (excluding the sky/moon) should be a little more blue, or the sky/moon should be a more grey/brown. Just to make everything come "together".
  
  You can change this by using the color balance tool, or painting over (with blue or brown) the parts that you want to change, and then set the blending mode to soft light, overlay, color, etc. Then adjust the opacity until you have it where you like.
  
• Wings: It sort of looks like they just fade out or disappear into the horse... If a horse was a pegasus in real life, the wings would go all the way into the shoulder blades, with bones/cartilage going in. So what I'd recommend would be to either smudge or paint in some more wing so that it goes into the shoulder blade. Kind of like this: (and I changed the color a bit) a.yfrog.com/img152/1664/butterflykissesthefligh.jpg
  

But other than that, I think it looks great! I really don't have anything else to critique! Nice job!

[Butterfly Kisses]

Thanks for your critique Poet.

and thanks for taking the time to make adjustments to my own picture. The side-by-side comparison made it very easy/clear to see what you meant and what I should change next time around

Thanks so much!